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The Last Guest...

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Summary

This story is about a guest who lives his life, has a beautiful family, but suddenly some bad guys came who want to destroy their whole town.. Guest makes many friends!

Status
7mo ago
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1.. The soldier..

The bell rings.. The children entered the school happily with their schoolbags behind them.

-Go on then. School's about to start. You don't want to be late on your first day!! (mother)

The child was sitting next to his mother and father.

- But mom.. Im a guest. Nobody's going to like me..(Guest\Child)

2 children said:

- Hey look, its a stupid guest! Didint think there were any of them left!(Bully 1)

- Yeah, I know! (Bully 2)

And they were laughing, going to their classes.

-Ignore them. Go in there and be yourself, and you'll make friends in no time! (mother)

The child looks sadly at the mother.

-Remember what we've always told you. (Mother)

- Be strong, young man. (Father)

-Always be strong. (Mother)

After a few hours Guest, and with his parents, he had finished the lessons and then he went outside and went to a park full of children.

Guest climbed into the slide smiling. His parents were smiling... After a few minutes it started to rain. It doesn't matter that it's raining, it matters that it's good..

The parents looked at him gently. How Guest was rocking. But suddenly the child stares at something...

The parents turned their backs and it was..

-Woah! Look, You don't need to do this..(Father)

There was a soldier with a black mask on his mouth and a rifle in his hand. He was nervous.

In a second he shot the two parents.....

The child was crying.. The soldier went about his business..

The child went to his parents as they were on the ground, dead.

He was crying more and more.

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