What is your opinion?
Secretary
"Loved the constant character development and the emotional shifts from sweet and caring to forceful. Each one brought something fun and new to the story! ❤️"
Sissy macho boy
"Oh muy bien escritio excellente lessons ,boy sran mujeres ,etc"
Secretary
"Will Irina convert poor Alex, you know she will but he still thinks he can escape her power. Along with the help of her friend, colleague Dr Paige I am sure it is only a matter of time before Alex is fully feminised by his domineering boss Irina. Even so it is a exciting journey reading about the twists and turns in Alex's progression to becoming Irina's secretary."
Good Concept, But Needs Proofreading
"The premise of the story is promising. This is a story I've love to read, but just in the first two paragraphs there were so many awkward phrasing choices (like "descendance", "not specially smart", and "best considered lawyers"), that I just couldn't continue. A thorough proofreading and polishing pass would really help this story reach its potential."
