Inkitt
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Good story

"Nice action"

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Mafia

"I love this."

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Can't wait for the update

"I am so enjoying reading this book. I love the characters. I can't wait for an update and am hoping that William chills out a bit. "

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"Plot is good, good character building.. lot of spelling mistakes, I liked Sabrina's character"

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"I like the FMC is bold.I would like the plot should be more thrilling twist and turns."

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Yes

"A very romantic and hot story. Would recommend to others to read. I noticed minor grammar. Didn't give 5 stars as there is room for improvement. Great writing skills."

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Don’t read of you don’t want to subscribe!

"It really frustrates me when authors make books free for a few chargers and then they are subskription the rest. I don’t check for that and it just pissed me off if i start Reading a book i think is promissing and then i can’t finish because the rest is subskription. Chose to make it free or subscription not both. I never pay when its half half. Feel it is just trickery. If i notice it is just party free from the start i dont even start Reading the book. "

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