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Wow, I love it

"Wow, it was beautifully done. I still have pity for lucian, but he deserves everything he got."

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Good so far

"Interesting read. I hope she finally finds someone who truly loves her. I hope he gets what he deserves. Misery!!!"

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When love is too late

"I loved this short story so much! I think it’s the first story I’ve ever Read that the other person had Found out in advance and actually Plotted getting him back! She surely Did & in a wonderful way too. Men’s Pride makes no sense to me most Of the time. I’m just glad that the two LI’s were able to realize what they’d Lost bc of it. "

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When love is too late

"Nice story, but I feel sad for Lucian and Zander "

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Fake love

"It's too much twisted"

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