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Perfect, a must read

"So much packed into each chapter. I loved every character, even the evil ones. To know someone so thoroughly is a gift only written about but dreamed of in every heart. This is that story. Perfect"

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Perfection comes before the subscription tier

"I'm going to preface this review by stating a simple fact in my opinion. Stories don't need to be long, they don't need to be overinvolved, sometimes simple is best. I won't finish this book as I don't need to. The 27 chapters I read before the subscription tier kicked in were enough to satisfy me as a reader. The book to that point was filled with intrigue, plots, all sorts of misdirections and countered plots. The villains were identified, countered, and dealt with in a truly glorious fashion. No plot worked against the royal pair, no intrigue survived the intelligence and sometimes caustic wit of the Princess. She dealt with her enemies in a true royal fashion and rewarded her faithful in equal amounts. She saves those who need saving and punishes those who deserved worse. I've read this author before and I can say with complete certainty that the first 27 chapters of this book are some of her best work. Only one strange instance that defies believability, I believe she thought it needed to be there but upon reflection I think she removes it in an edit...or not....it's her book to do with what she will. My advice is to treat the first 27 chapters as a book unto itself. If you wish to continue you can, I believe it isn't necessary. "

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Too Funny

"This was too funny to read"

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