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Virgie's Take

"Loved Cade and his patience. He was a gentle lover and a protector. Loved Natalie and her fierceness. She lacked much fear and was adventurous."

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OMG

"Oh My God! I love Natalie! Amazing amazing work! Just read one chapter and I'm hooked! I'm gonna read more! Well defined plot, amazing humor, suspenseful and just awesome! Well done author! Keep up the good work! "

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Wow

"I have no words, That was amazing!!! The descriptions were so good it felt like I was actually there with Natalie, I came across two typos; hence the 4 stars otherwise, amazing. Thank you for sharing!!!"

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