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😊🍀2🤭

"Gute kurze Geschichte, nicht sehr tiefgründig, aber genau das für zwischendurch zum Lesen.🍀😊"

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The One For Me

"Jade hands down your new favorite book boyfriend. Jade shows love and understanding when you have some of the worst behavior by friends and lovers. "

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Hii

"Wow. Just wow. That was one of my favourite stories for sure😭❤️ I just loved how u played around with your characters, and it ended so beautifully.😭❤️ Very good story, can't wait to read more🎀"

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Spicy

"I enjoyed reading this story because it shows that in life people can stick to shit because it’s what they have done for so many years. However when they take a step back and wake up, is the past truly worth the price of loosing the future. The old saying of being true to self applies, honesty is the best way forward. When you find your people or person, you will be whole. Well done. "

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The protagonists are not mere archetypes; they are complex, multifaceted individuals whose emotions and desires are rendered with an almost poetic subtlety.

"This is not simply a tale of passion but a nuanced exploration of connection—both the intoxicating highs and the inevitable vulnerabilities that come with it. The novel’s allure lies in its authenticity; the portrayal of the initial meeting between lovers is depicted with such intricate detail and emotional precision that it captures the delicate dance of anticipation, fear, and unbridled joy that defines human connection. Ultimately, this novel transcends the boundaries of its genre, providing a profound commentary on the nature of intimacy that challenges preconceived notions and invites the reader to view romance through a more sophisticated, reflective lens. It is a work that lingers in the mind, a testament to the transformative power of meeting someone for the first time—and the beauty that can arise when a story dares to break the mold."

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Great story

"One of my favorite stories I've read. Great writing, great story, and good characters. Well written and sucked me right in! "

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The one for me

"Loved it sad it’s finished love your style of writing "

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Varying the vocabulary would show better command of writing skills. I’ve got nothing against the word “fuck” - but it’s waaayyy overused in this book.

"See above comments. Probably those less familiar with more complex erotica might find this satisfying. There are some strong possibilities here, though. "

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