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Eternal Kings

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Summary

This Book tells The Story of a World drowned in War, Where The Truthspeakers became Liars and The Frauds became The Most Trusted Ones Where Adam and his Loyal Friends got sent by a Mysterious Old man Only to Eliminate The Menace of Humanity, The one who Claimed with a Grin and Open arms to be God The Greatest Calamity...praised in the name of Sindor...

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
4.0 3 reviews
Age Rating
18+

Prologue + Eternal Peace

In a Dark and empty room, a Corpse fell, Breaking the Silence, or perhaps, Breaking the Chains

On the Cold and Firm Ground, Powerless, his weak and heavy hand resting on his chest

Feeling a Hole, he gasped

His Cyan Blue eyes wide open, his Suffocating open mouth speechless

His Long White hair and Body planted in a slowly expanding red flake

While Someone, Stood few inches away from him, and raised his arm

It was painted with red, the hand was almost closed as if it was holding something invisible

red colored drops fell from those fingers, and hit the ground without a noise

It smelled like rusted Metal

The arm suddenly burned with a Menacing Purple Fire, almost declaring a Revolution

He was Smiling, a Big, and Proud grin

Even his eyes were dead of Laughter, looking down at the man on the Ground

The Poor Fool, or maybe, The Eternal King, asked with a shattered and dry voice, “Why...What...have you done...?”

the smiling man made slow but steady steps, his Elegant Black shoes sounding Hard as they collided with the ground with each step

he stopped, and stood now even closer to the man on the ground

he lifted his burning arm slowly, pointing it on the fallen man’s chest

He spoke with teasing tone and a smirk, “I hope you had fun so far, but now, it’s our turn to rule this world, Farewell...Old King !”


ETERNAL KINGS

Chapter 1 : Eternal Peace


A Young man, gifted with Beautiful Cyan Blue eyes and Dark Brown hair, wearing a Black Hoodie and pants, was sitting on dry dirt

with crossed legs, closed eyes, and the palms of his united hands facing him

his lips, moving in harmony with his heart

infront of him, was a Big tombstone with words written on it, around it rested Grass and green life, and Blue and Purple Flowers who stood out by their vibrant color

he kissed the palms of his hands, and opened his eyes

at that moment, it felt like he was born again, into reality

the first thing he noticed were those beautiful flowers around the stone, he approached them and smelled their refreshing yet calming scent

a cool breeze suddenly came, without any warning, but the young man let it gently caress his face

he closed his eyes and raised his head toward the cloudy sky, breathing that fresh air with passion

He felt one with nature, he felt Alive, he felt Home

it was a bit cold, but the atmosphere was truly peaceful

the young man looked around him and saw Many other stones, and far from him, a group of people, a covered woman was holding a plastic bottle full of water, she opened it, and poured it infront of a stone

he felt what was known to humans as Empathy, he put his hand on his forehead, while his eyes looked at the ground and said : “Thank you...for keeping me Alive”

he took a deep breath, pressed on his knees with his hands, and stood up

he walked away, stepping on dirt until he reached a black gate

he went through it, to meet the streets, at a wall, he saw a Man sitting, wearing a cap and old clothes painted of dirt

he had a grey beard, a burned face, and blank white eyes, it was obvious that he was desperately waiting for someone to give him a coin so that he could afford even a piece of bread

The Young man dived his hand in his pocket, and took it out closed, he crouched and grabbed the old man’s hand and gave him Money bills as he said : “Sir, take this”

The old man didn’t even notice Adam, probably because he isn’t even able to see him

The Old man said with a dry voice : “Thank you...my child”

The Blue eyed man could see the old man shedding tears, he replied : “God bless you sir” and left

he slowly walked in the streets, and started Daydreaming, as usual, but his eyes suddenly started to shine, a tear was about to fall as he said to himself : “i’m feeling...”

Suddenly, his pocket started to vibrate he took a phone out of it, the phone was ringing, he tapped on the screen and put the phone next to his ear as he said : “Hello..”

someone shouted with a Happy voice : “Hey Adam ! How are you doing ?”

Adam replied : “Hello Harry, i’m fine thank you for asking”

Harry added : “it’s been a long time, i’m at Noah’s house, he invited me and the rest of the crew to show us something Special and he wanted you to join us, sooo...are you free ?”

Adam replied : “Hmm, Alright i will be there in fifteen minutes”

Harry expressed : “Alright see you later !”

Adam turned off his phone and kept walking around the street, he noticed people passing around him, an orange leaf fell from a Tree on his Hair, he picked the leaf and threw it away

The walk was long, but Adam was in another world, thinking about nothing and everything, switching from a memory to another one, Until he arrived

at the door of a house, Adam knocked and stood still

The door got open, and a young man with Brown eyes and hair, welcomed Adam with a smile on his face yelling : “Oh Adam Enter Enter !! i’m glad to see you again, how has been your Travel ?”

Adam answered : “not that bad” then asked : “but anyways where is that special thing you made us come for ?”

Noah replied : “Oh you’re not Losing time are you ? follow me in the Living room !”

he closed the door and Adam went to the living room, it was full of Wooden Furniture, and Elegant looking Couches

there was a Nice perfume in the room, the lighting of the chandeliers made it look even more appealing

there, he noticed Three people

Harry, a Guy with long brown hair and eyes, who is in fact his Bestfriend since childhood

but Also his Loyal Friend Jordan, with his Golden Yellow hair and eyes

and Gregory, a Blond boy with Green eyes, Jordan’s younger brother, who shouted : “ADAM ! how are you doing it’s been so long Maaan !”

Jordan spoke : “Yo, Nice to see you again Adam”

Adam felt overwhelmed by his Friends’ Care and Attention for him, he replied : “oh..Thanks guys”

Noah clapped his hands and declared : “Alright, it’s time for the big reveal !

Gregory yelled with happiness : “Finally, Go on i can’t wait for it !”

Harry told Gregory : “Shut up Gregory, you’ve been yelling for hours, and let Noah talk !”

Gregory replied with a funny face : “okay okay”

Noah grabbed the cover that was on the seemingly big Object and pulled it away

It was a Big Green Stone, it looked like it was made of glass, Everyone’s eyes got wide open and Harry shouted : “Wow it’s amazing, where did you find it ?”

Noah with crossed arms and a silly proud face explained : “Well one day i explored a Forest and found a hidden cave in the middle of it, that’s where i found this Big Boy hehe”

Noah added with a serious face : “i was intrigued by its Charming Color, so i analyzed it then decided to make you see it too”

Gregory asked : “why didn’t you Sell it ? i bet it’s worth a lot of money !"

Harry commented : “he’s got a point”

Noah Screamed angrily at Harry and Gregory : “Shut up you idiots, you only think about Money !”

Adam touched the Stone and it felt Good, he told his friends : “Guys...that touch, is it possible for a Rock to be this Soft !?”

Everyone approached the Green stone then put their hands to touch it, Suddenly, The Stone started to Shine

Adam saw a Glowing White Light coming out of the Rock, he felt weird, he felt like he couldn’t stand straight, he fell on the ground and started to lose counsciousness, then everything turned Black...

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