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Love this Story!

"I love this love story! The writer has a special way of developing the characters. It is as if you are a part of their lives. I can not wait to to follow their journey through the rest of the series books. Well Done!"

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Very entertaining

"Normally cheating tropes aren't my favorite but this was done well. I love that Vivek fell first and he fell HARD for Olivia. Lots of drama kept it entertaining yet I think lots of women can understand what's she's going through. It's written in a realistic way, and the situation is one many women are going through themselves. Would recommend"

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A great read.

"The pacing was fresh, the plot twist was, WOW. lol. But I very much enjoyed this story. The only thing I can personally say that I didn't like about the story was the children. Well the daughter. I'm not a fan of her character for personal reasons and I was just in my feelings about her tbh. BUT, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!"

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That twist!

"The pacing was a little off in some of the early chapters but gets better. overall the writing is very enjoyable and well edited! I love the storyline, the drama. THE PLOT TWIST! I didn't see that coming. Spicy scenes were hot, I love a softdom. Definitely recommend."

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Jenk

"I enjoyed reading it ~ a littlse disappointed witn the short chapters. The intimate scenes were well done apart from the 'sir' and "daddy' which I think is very demeaning to women. Looking forward to reading the follow up."

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