What is your opinion?
Enjoyable
"The plot is an interesting idea, builds well so far. I'm definitely interested in what comes next. Good job! The story as a whole needs editing and some grammar work. There are a few questions from my reader point of view that pop up from time to time, more so on clarification/why. The story flows, albeit bumpy at times, but like I previously stated though, I am definitely curious as to what comes next."
A World unknown
"It's interesting so far some of the spelling errors can confuse an issue but the author has a good idea if he can continue to develop the story to a satisfactory ending."
A World Unknown
"I liked how the author has a very clear voice for the characters, where you can tell who is speaking from how they speak and what words they use for the most part. I also enjoyed how the author keeps it interesting and I have not checked how much longer the chapter is out of boredom or anything. I would recommend this book to both science fiction or adventure lovers and romance lovers as it has a great plot with a love interest intertwined with it all."
Alright
"The story's alright so far. It's a good read. Keep it up writing, don't worry about the ratings much. :)"