Inkitt
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Keep it up!

"I so invested in this story! Please continue writing!"

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Solstice Hunt

"I was just starting to get into the story and now interrupted by commenting system. Very disappointing, I don’t know if I will be able to get into reading it again. Sad. It seems to be written for you adults."

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Interesting idea

"So far the plot is compelling, just enough of everything to keep you reading without drowning out the plot with love and such. "

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