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Under scarlet stars

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Summary

In a realm fated by the stars to be segregated into two kingdoms (with smaller reigns constantly choosing sides ) who presumably despise each other, Zurine has been deemed the outlier. The Celestial white kingdom is a pool of porcelain white skin and hair. Their poshe accents have only cursed Zurine for daring to be brown skinned with white hair, earning herself the whispers and rumors of society. On the other hand, The Scarlet Red kingdom is full of secrets. Secrets of how it earned its name from spilled blood. Secrets of how its Queen is a wicked woman who cuts the head of anyone who dares defies her. Yet still manages to uphold the name wonderland. Living with her kingly father and two older sisters who make her life hell, Zurine has been filled with more than enough hate to turn her into a deranged murderer who craves the spilled blood of others. Physically haunted by the shadows of her victims, Zurine doesn't like who she has become but refuses to let herself be known. But when she is forced from her home, with nothing but her sister's proposal letter to send out to the king of the opposing side, the Scarlet red kingdom proves to be a rabbit hole full of lies and secrets. (Inspired by Alice in wonderland and astronomy) 🔭🤍🪐🥀 🃏 🗝️🗡️🌙💫🌑🦊

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

✧༺♥༻∞ Prologue ∞༺♥༻✧

Past the horizon, the scarlet stars glimpse at the world from their own little cloud up in the folds of the milky way, dusting the realms with clandestine tales.

And as the saying goes, It will only end in tragedy.

Two weeks ago

The old grass crunched beneath her black boots as she heaved the Prince’s body away from his

sanctuary. She could feel the grin on her face, content to have ended so many lives, yet bore a chest so heavy she may have grown a heart of stone.

At least with a heart of that calibre, the excuse to kill would come much easier.

No doubt, newspapers will be flying around town about the scattered blood that would only be found in the morning.

She didn’t like it. She didn’t like this one bit.

She wished cool the earth with tears for what she has done, but alas it only made the grin hold stronger and goosebumps to relish her skin.

The only problem now was her aching legs ready to collapse.

But she couldn’t get caught. Not yet.

As if hearing her fears, the prince’s wounded body left a trail of blood behind him. Her frustration of the waning night and him only adding to it led to the long nails of her inky veined hand to clutch his foot until new blood flushed out.

Once sure she was far from the palace’s reach, she set his leg down and looked into the prince’s glass eyes, wondering if they once gleamed with happiness or were filled with love for those he cared for. But that didn’t matter now, he was gone.

It’s important to mention there was something severely wrong with the girl. The way she laughed about the situation was depressing. A laugh of someone who is tired. Or perhaps even insane.

For a moment she let herself sink to the ground, lifting her veil to let the night creatures get a glimpse of a deformed face and pitch black eyes. She looked like a demon, hunting for people to drag into hell with her. Yet what choice did one have when the stars have deemed them this fate. To turn into a killer when the hurt of their lives becomes too much to bear.

In truth the stars are the most despicable of all the celestial bodies - I do not think they would take kindly to that if they were to find out but I do not say lies.

They like to remind people of what happens when they are ungrateful for their circumstances. Even ones of starvation, constant war, unpaid labour and forced to live in the slumps, but those are not the stories I am here to share.

Though, in essence that is unfortunately what happened to this young lady turned murderer at night (occasionally that is) when her churlish young mind made the mistake of asking for more than what was predestined for her.

Some may argue it was years ago, (10 to be exact) but the stars never forget. That is exactly why they are cruel.

As the night aged and the Prince’s body halted its bleeding, footsteps started approaching. Another pair followed, then another and another. At some point one loses count and for that the girl ought to have run. Taking down just one prince was easy but a group of men (especially if they were well trained) was probably too much for a normal serial killer.

She stood, adjusting the veil over her head to cover the true face of her notorious second identity because when all is done, the black deformation that covers her body will vanish to nothing and she shall be back to normal.

Drawing out a sword (one taken from a guard that is long since dead now, his blood now dried over top of many others) from the belt around her waist, she spun it around with a stained hand waiting for the owners of the footsteps to appear.

The anicaption wasn’t what made her nauseous. It was how wrongly familiar it all felt. To be in the dead of night with the smell of blood relieving her nostrils. It was an uninterrupted repeated cycle.

When the personnels finally appeared there would be no mistake that these were palace guards (even through a dark veil). The royal crest printed on their uniforms was a half moon with a sword going through it and a crown on top. They wore it with pride.

Was their loyalty to the crown worth their lives?

Their heads didn’t turn to the blood oozed prince below. They simply glared at the murder, their faces stripped of any fear but if one paid close attention they could see the tremble of soldiers’ hands.

“Killer” one said through gritted teeth.

They unsheathed their swords in unison. Daring to point their silver tips at her.

The one in the front came forth “In the name of King Alexander and the heavenly bodies we command you to surrender!” He demanded.

Was the palace drafting fools now?

She refused to comply.

“Will you surrender?” He called out again. After a matter of seconds his patients grew weary. “Very well.” He gave the signal and they were all heading straight at her with contorted expressions.

The leader reached her first, bringing his sword down, cutting right through her shoulder. She winced -- particularly the only concept of humanity she has shown that night -- but it was soon overtaken by a ravenous scowl followed by an upward blow. His blood splattered all over her veil and some made it through to her face. Seeing the blood, tasting it, brought her enough joy to start to laugh hysterically.

The others halted to a stop, gawking.

“She really is insane.” Another said.

By the time they could understand her acknowledgement of the comment they had already collapsed on the cold ground with their necks bleeding out.

The meaty flesh stenched the air around, some even clumping together into a small pile in the dirt.

It was disgusting to her, yes, but it wasn’t her job to clean up after them. That was the helpless detectives’ job.

When backup still hadn’t arrived, the veil had been lifted again and her legs were finally given a true break. The curse was breaking for the night, affirmed by her camouflage withering away, and a wave of panic crashed over her as her deformed figure returned to normal. No long claws but rather soot covered fingers. Clear mind instead of one clogged with ideas of killings. Her hair on the other hand that now fell in curls around her shoulder had stayed the same in its white sheen, marking her a citizen of the Celestial kingdom.

The night is now quiet except for the girl’s routinely indescribable murmurs that left her tongue far too rapidly.

At times like these, it was clear the thirst for blood was devouring her soul more and more, as she seemed less psychologically human.

Leading only to more bodies being killed off and more blood filled yards of grass, thinning out the Celestial population.

She sat in silence for a while. No real tears or sobs.

I supposed she had gotten used to this and retired from the act of sympathy.

Slowly the souls of the dead detached from their bodies, joining the girl’s collection of shadows gathered over the years. They were menacing to those who could see them, though she has yet to meet a person who truly can.

The gruesome presence of those who were killed by the fated murderer, was more or less a constant reminder to the girl of what can happen if the stars were defied. So now everywhere she goes, the shadows trail and latch onto every word and thought spoken to or about her, hoping to twist them.

“There is a trail of blood here, Sir. I think we’re getting closer.” A voice called. He sounded particularly lighthearted.

“Good, check around the area for more bodies, I will follow the blood trail.” A deeper second voice with more authority followed.

She was paralyzed on the spot.

After years of this vicious cycle, she couldn’t possibly be found today.

I would reach out a hand to help but I am only the storyteller here.

Eventually though, she clocked back into reality and used her sword as a staff to stand and stagger her to a nearby cluster of trees.

She didn’t get too far before the second voice called out again. “I know someone’s there. Show yourself.”

With the shock of someone being so close by, she turned before she remembered a veil didn’t cover her face. Turning back too soon to only see a haze of a man’s face, she attempted to run. Luckily her cloak blended her in, though she soon took refuge behind a large tree, her legs unable to travel any farther.

Sounds of crunched leaves grew louder behind her.

“Please no.” She whispers softly to herself.

“If I am to find you, things won’t look pretty.” She could hear the rumble in his voice.

A light from a lantern shone down the middle of the pathway. She saw his silhouette next to her but his eyes wandered elsewhere. He moved a couple steps past her and before he got a chance to look around, she had already moved away nearly becoming one with the dark scenery. His steps continued on and without a second thought she ran into the night with her shadows close behind.

‘She really is mad’ They had said.

And so what if she is?

Well at least they are smart enough to finally deduce that she is a woman. Losing to one must have stung.

But she is not just any woman.

She is the notorious murderer.

She is Zurine.

And woefully, her story is one I must share


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