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Becoming Her Romeo | Mafia Heirs #2

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Summary

He made sure they remained star-crossed lovers until he was ready to let their stars align. ***** She was the hopeless romantic, standing on the other side of the fish tank, waiting for her Romeo to appear. But when has a woman in our world got what she wanted. The only romantic thing about me was my name, Romeo De Luca. I didn’t believe in love stories. Because Romeo died, didn’t he? She learned her lesson the hard way by putting her faith In me. She gave me a choice, her or my future as the capo of Berkeley. 5 years after I broke her heart. I heard she now has to marry a man older than her father and she is doing it willingly. And only a capo can save her from that fate. She is not the same anymore. And neither am I, the same power-hungry man. In the Famiglia, we don’t get a second chance but I did. And I will bring my Bianca Juliet Caruso back by becoming her Romeo. ***** I have completed writing the story and uploading the chapters at regular intervals.

Status
Complete
Chapters
71
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Logline + Blurb

He made sure they remained star-crossed lovers until he was ready to let their stars align.


She was the hopeless romantic, standing on the other side of the fish tank, waiting for her Romeo to appear. But when has a woman in our world got what she wanted.

The only romantic thing about me was my name, Romeo De Luca. I didn’t believe in love stories. Because Romeo died, didn’t he?

She learned her lesson the hard way by putting her faith In me. She gave me a choice, her or my future as the capo of Berkeley.

5 years after I broke her heart. I heard she now has to marry a man older than her father and she is doing it willingly.

And only a capo can save her from that fate. She is not the same anymore. And neither am I, the same power-hungry man.

In the Famiglia, we don’t get a second chance but I did. And I will bring my Bianca Juliet Caruso back by becoming her Romeo.

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I’m Fleming!, a professional Comic, Character, Webtoon, and Cover artist, and I just finished reading your story. I genuinely loved it. The way you build tension, craft atmosphere, and develop such authentic characters is incredibly impressive.
Your writing naturally lends itself to visual storytelling, and I truly believe it has amazing potential as a graphic novel or comic. I’d be honored to collaborate and help bring your world to life through expressive, cinematic art that captures the emotion and energy of your work.
I also want to mention that I’m flexible with budget, and we can discuss terms that work for both of us as we explore the project Discord: patricia_castillo55

a year

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