Fate of the Wolf

"Loved the plot of this story. I wasn’t sure where it was going at first but the more I read the more interesting it got. Started feeling like a “5 people you meet” type of story and I found that very refreshing. You have a great ability to explain not only a setting but the characters emotions and thoughts. Well done. There were quite a few grammatical errors. I was able to figure them out but a good proof reading with a look at not just spelling but incomplete sentence or sentence structure would help. Overall a very good read and strong plot. "