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Absolutely thrilling
"I don't know how this author attempted at this precise story. It is flawless. I have read many stories with hundreds of grammer mistakes and spelling, even my own work is a disaster. The characters are well developed and the scenes have thrilling elements that make me envious.😷. I really love this work.. We can actually see Julian's starter ( actually don't know his name spelling😐) and him ending up dead. Consider adding a bit of thoughts in the character..(an envious girl's suggestion).. Overall, A clearly compelling read which is fit for Inkitt's sister app. Please don't start setting prices for this story at least☺."
I have no words.
"I'm here to edit my review. The author is absolutely amazing and knows how to build an interesting plot. This is the type of book you want as paperback and keep in your personal library to read over and over again. All characters are absolutely well developed. I've no words to explain how amazing the book is. Grammer is on point, Plot is compelling. Florence at first I thought was a little weird but as the story progresses I love her more and more. She might be my favorite so far. But Asha that resilient downtown girl is also amazing. Floyd who is usually busy with his girlfriend has a good character. Lexi and Shawn are so in love and amazing characters. I absolutely hate the governor which is fit for the antagonist. Overall amazing. I can't wait to read more. "
An intriguing mystery in an intriguing society
"With this story the author develops an intriguing mystery set on the background of the alternative African society of Malindoria which mirrors but also subverts current societal problems. He does so using well-developed and multi - dimensional characters and a nice writing style. "
A World made of Rainbows and Ponies for the High Borns!
"For the Highborns, Malindoria is a fabulous playground full of pleasures and nightly excitement. There is a party almost every night in the Malindorian Hotel but none more sumptuous or luxurious than when it is hosted by the Imara Family. Tonight they celebrate the birthday of Floyd Imara’s best friend, Julien. Julien unfortunately has a little too much to drink this night, and this might be the reason why he comes on so strongly to Floyd’s beautiful sister, Florence. But how can Julien resist the gorgeous Florence in her form-fitting red dress and long, ebony hair? Florence rejects him outright and this puts Julien into a foul mood. He beats a helpless server from Downtown nearly to death over Florence’s rejection. But what does it matter? Everyone knows that the Downtowners aren’t really people. They were made to serve the superior Highborns. The plot is yummy. I love distinct classes. It’s easy to assume the Highborns are the bad guys at first, but I like how Author Intrivive shows us a kind, caring nature to some members of the Imara family, like how Dr. Lexi Imara shows mercy to her servant Asha by serving her tea, and even offering to buy a new rug when Asha accidentally stains it. At any rate this is a fun, mystery story and I can’t wait to find out who poisoned Julien."
Intriguing mystery
"The plot of the struggle between haves and have nots, the characters, their various motivations, the conflicts, amidst a murder mystery makes for an interesting read. Each chapter is like a layer of revelation and does justice to the various characters, giving the room to shine. I’ve really enjoyed what I read so far. "
Dynasty!!
"This really is like a teen drama/mystery! New chapters continue to reveal more about the characters. The author does a really decent job of describing the scenery, painting a picture of the scene. It'd be nice to see a little bit more of that in other parts of the chapters especially as it pertains to characters such as what they are wearing. (As it applies to what is necessary for the scene). I do hope the author explores more about the people of downtown. Because that seems to have caught my interest! I'm not sure who killed Julian just yet, but I'm going to bet it's one of the rich people!! Whoever it may be the author is doing a good job of leading us on the trail! "
