What is your opinion?
Luna Battle: The Magic Curse
"I loved the storyline itself. However i felt it left a few unanswered questions. But i think maybe you might be saving it for the next book. Which i would love to read. I felt some parts were really short in describing things, so you couldn't get a proper picture leading up to the main bits. It made it confusing at times. There were some parts where the pronouns and characters names were either the wrong character or switched around. This made some paragraphs hard to read and needed to go over a few times to figure out for the setting who was where and who were talking or doing something. Overall really good book to read."
Luna Battle: The Magic Curse
"Great read love the plot"
Great Book
"I love the book and the plot and story line but I think if you went though and proof read the chapters before posting it then you would realize that some words were autocorrected and they are not correct and the grammar makes it hard to read it..."
Great story
"Overall a really great book! It says it’s complete though but this definitely feels like there should be way more. 😢 I hope the story will get finished. "
Luna Battle: The Magic Curse
"I loved the second book as it told the story of kellan, Xenia and Darius and their children all grown up and starting their own grown up lives. The fact that it brought together all the different kingdoms that were once separated bc of the King before Darius and Kellan. But also brought new characters in and showed that live can heal so much more than just hearts. It was a strong story which was good that it brings the storyline to a hea. The book has some grammar issues but it's not been fully edited so that's to be expected and does not take away from the novel itself. The characters are strong and each have there little quirks but it makes you feel as you're right there which is hard for many authors to accomplish and this one has done it with both stories. I would love to read more by this author. "
Very great story
"Great story love also the first book"
Great continuation of the first book
"Excellent read. Needs some clean up on grammar and punctuation, but otherwise I’ve thoroughly enjoyed it."
Nice story
"So far the book has me hooked, please continue writing this way. And take your time, don't ever rush on the story. "
loving this series
"Great sequel to the first book, loved hearing Xenia/elara’s storey and am loving storms even more"
Love it 🤩 pleas tell me the next chapters will be soon I subscribed but I need the rest asap 😂
"Please tell me it will be finished soon"
Mutliple books in one!
"Wasn’t expecting this many stories in one which was a nice surprise. I read Queen Goddess first and could help but wonder if the stories were slightly connected and whether this story was before or after Queen Goddess. Not as much erotica in this one, but the stories were good."
Luna Battle
"I thought both books were well written, the plot was catchy, and the characters were all interesting and different. "
Luna battle the game
"I love the characters in the novel. I enjoyed the fact that Darius Dad was killed by Xenia and the torment Grant went through thanks to Elijah. “What goes around comes around “"
My review
"Sometimes it is hard to follow who is talking even within the POV. I like the plot but it is a little confusing. Grammar and punctuation is lacking. "
Luna gamble
"☺️☺️☺️😊👍👍👍👍"
