Roller Coaster!

"This novel is a roller coaster of a ride, literally! Like most stories I have read, this one needs some proofreading and editing (names, he/she misused), but nothing I couldn’t fill in the gaps myself. The writing style is extremely descriptive and detailed. Some might accuse this as being too wordy. Others might love being able to feel, smell, hear, and even see everything with such vivid description, on everything! I do believe that a chapter or two is missing. No real investigation into Austin’s barrel racing incident, only the assumption that it was a Ferguson. Also, I would have liked to see what exactly happened to Oakleigh, or at least some sort of search and rescue/recovery. All in all, this was a great read, and I really liked the ending. Might even be able to do a spinoff with Carrington’s character."