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Sweet

"So this brother of her husband has a good heart even though he’s hiding it. Think he’s in love with his sister in law."

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Great story

"At first I was angry at Ashley's mental struggle even after she caught her husband cheating. But luckily, things slowly turned for the better. Ashley's sister is a self-centered annoying character. "

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Kregner23

"Amazing story"

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Not sure where it’s heading but…

"…sob far it seems like it could be rather interesting but that really depends on how deep the plot and the romance go, not a bad start—I’m at chapter 4 and my only concern is that this protagonist really sends like a wallflower and I don’t get a sense of her yet—who is she, what’s her life usually like before so this madness?"

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