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Captivating story!

"Love the characters and plot."

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The Dance of Shadow and Light

"I have read hundreds of books about magic and quests from authors like Canavan to Feist to Brooks, but to read one from a unknown author and still get the same feeling of anticipation and complete absorption of this book as to not realise that the whole night has passed without realising it is why I love reading. Especially when I find a author that draws me in like you do it's few and far between. "

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A dance of shadow and light

"It bZ be a overwhelming journey reading this story. I was delighted reading it. Would you give us more updates? I'll be waiting for more "

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A dance of shadow and light

"I really enjoyed the story I hope more will come soon"

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Can't wait

"I was engrossed. Can't to follow as you keep working on this. It's needs some editing attention, but mostly just for forgotten words and the like. If you ever get a publishing deal, I would buy it."

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A Dance of Shadows and light

"This book gives the feels in every chapter. The humor is on point even through the seriousness. A simple human girl, travesing all kinds of trials and finally triumphing at the end."

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Can’t put this book down!

"It’s well written, great characters, and impossible to put down! "

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Wow! Wonderful storyline.

"I would recommend this story to all my friends. Powerful, intense, wonderful storyline. Keeps you wondering what next. Can't wait for the next story in series."

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Brilliant story

"Loved this story. I wasn’t sure what to expect at the start, but it wasn’t what I got. This book was amazing from start to finish. "

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Looking out for new chapters

"I just wanted to keep on reading the story, I am looking forward to the next parts. Amazing storyline!"

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Caught Me From Chapter One

"I can't remember how I stumbled across this story, but I'm so, so glad I did. The characters feel real and personal, the world is fascinating (and intimidating!), and the magic system has been a delight to learn about. The author has done an amazing job weaving plot with characterization, and I'm always excited to see what's going to happen next."

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Amazing characters and story

"The characters are amazing and I love this book. The whole thing is so unique and I’m obsessed."

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Love love love

"Loved every bit of this book, can’t wait for more,loved every character in in with a few exceptions (won’t give anything away) 😂 Amazing author. Did you have to leave a cliff hanger like that? Thanks "

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I'm loving it!

"Loving this book with all my heart 💖💖💖"

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Leviathan

"This is a well written story. It has drama, suspense, romance and love. The author is well versed in character development and how to keep the reader engaged. This is a very good read, and is well written."

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Ooooh

"OMG!!! My future, my legacy, my light... I melted right there 😁 what a chapter!!! Thank you for sharing."

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Leviathan

"I really like the story line, creativity and the realism to the feelings. It feels like i am in the story."

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Leviathan

"When I started reading this, I wasn't expecting to get hooked up so easily. This review is to show support for a good story and a promising author. The writing style is excellent and the characters are so likeable, even if it's a dark fantasy. I love that in a book."

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