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Unidentifiable Evil

"Couldn't stop reading. Kept me on edge, and i loved that you left us with a great cliff hanger. Can't wait for part 2. "

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Such a great read! Couldn't stop

"I read most of the book at work in one night. I just couldn't put it down. Can't wait to read what comes next! Thanks for leaving it on a cliff hanger for now! "

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The book is so good

"So far, I have loved everything about the book. I can't put it down! The thrill of what's next, it's exciting to keep reading. "

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Ughhhhh!!!!

"Man, I gotta start checking when the book is not done! LOL. I am so hooked. I haven’t put the book down. Great characters. Great plot. Great everything. I love the bond with the four friends and the dads. Bummed to wait for more. Booooo. "

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Unidentifiable Evil is GRIPPING

"Every chapter I have read so far hosts some of the most incredibly vivid characters that pop from the page, with a plot concept that is as fun and dark as you could imagine! The moments of light humour are sprinkled perfectly through an otherwise tense and emotional masterpiece of a story. The main mystery is one incredibly gripping and tense, the moments of fluff between an enjoyable break. The slow burn romance effortlessly weaved between the chapters is one to pine for, and every moment the characters share together I am certain to either laugh, smile or cry. Amazing job author! I will definitely be watching for more chapters ❤️"

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Addictive story

"The characters have great chemistry between them (Theo and Lily's sweet moments, Eric's Golden Retriever energy), the plot is compelling, the mystery is well-thought and I think the story has a very nice pace so far. And, while the text could use a bit of revision and editing here and there, and some character's reactions could be ever so slightly adjusted, the part that pulls you in is definitely there, and it's addictive. Overall, I think this story has great potential, and I can't wait for more chapters. :)"

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