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Good job

"There are many grammatical mistakes.The plot was great.I liked the plot."

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Like the plot twists but not punishment for y/n

"Of course the plot twists....it was amazing but you shouldn't have to torture y/n that much....it's kinda too unfair how Jungkook treats y/n that was totally violence too cruel and brutal for girls,..."

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