Inkitt
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Nice feel good story

"Entertaining story. Need some editing to make the reading experience better and understandable. But the story line was good. I like the short stories now and then"

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Enjoying it

"Keep writing. Story is good. "

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A fun read

"A good entertaining read "

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Good book

"I’m really loving this book. It is very well written and full of suspense. I love Lucinda and Tony. Hopefully they’ll get their Happily Ever After!"

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Great story

"I absolutely love this story! I wish it would’ve been longer and that never happens lol. Good job writing this, you have gained a new follower! "

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Great story

"I am hooked. Great story and have other things to do but I keep reading, honestly stop because I have to cook and go to work. "

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The lost daughter of a Don

"Great read. I loved how their story unfolded and the plot twisted. The pace was good, and the action was sharp and realistic. Very enjoyable x Leah"

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The Lost Daughter of a Don

"Great short story. Exciting , captivating, some real drama Love how you wove the story and yet true love was there as well"

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Nothing in chapter

"Sorry, but there are no words. I only see the title of the chapter."

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Ard

"Interesting read"

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The Lost Daughter Of A Don

"This story has the ability to be really good, however, it needs to be severely edited. There are numerous spelling mistakes, punctuation errors and grammatical errors throughout the book. Not to mention wrong words being used; for example Garder should be garter. The ending feels rushed and incomplete. "

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