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A story that sometimes feels like a poem in prose
"What stayed with me the most while reading Falling Like Seasons was the way the seasons become more than just a setting. The temperament, charm, colours, and changing moods of each season seem to find their way into the protagonist herself, into the way she experiences life, remembers things, feels, and even understands herself. And I found that incredibly beautiful. There were moments when the story genuinely felt like a poem written in prose. The descriptions are particularly vivid. Being a very visual reader myself, I loved how easily I could picture the world around her. There were chapters where it almost felt as though the writer had invited me to walk a few steps behind the protagonist, to quietly follow her through her world, watching everything unfold almost like a film playing in front of me. Emotionally, the story also knows how to make its intentions clear. Her betrayal, the feeling of having been treated as someone's second choice, and the hurt and fear that eventually made her run from her own feelings all came through very clearly. And then there are these wonderfully soft moments. The kind where the reading experience suddenly feels like floating on a little leaf boat across a quiet lake on a spring morning... gentle, bright, weightless, almost dreamlike. Those moments were lovely. I did feel that the earlier chapters were more developed in terms of plot and storytelling. As the story progressed, some of the later chapters felt more spaced out, and I occasionally found myself wishing there was a little more happening beneath the surface. I would also have loved to see the friendships with her two friends developed more deeply. They are supportive of her, but I sometimes wanted to feel the intimacy of why they are her people, the little histories, inside jokes, disagreements, vulnerability, and effortless understanding that make a friendship feel lived-in rather than simply established. That said, there were several dialogues that genuinely caught me off guard. A few lines made me stop and think for a moment before continuing, and those are always my favourite moments in a book. Overall, Falling Like Seasons feels like a story written by someone who experiences emotion through imagery. There is tenderness here, but also hurt; softness alongside fear; and a very beautiful attempt to make the changing seasons mirror the changing seasons within a person. A gentle, visual, sometimes deeply poetic read, and one that left me thinking about how beautifully a season can become a part of someone's soul."
Feels like I'm daydreaming again.
"The pacing is slow but it just hit the readers' mind. ♥️♥️🫦The love like should be taken it slow. Even if it might be just a summer love. 💔I'm anticipating how lavender will cope up in the end. Sometimes love starts happy and then what? I hope she would get her happy ending. Because the way how the wrote her love in chapter one is heart breaking. 💔💔 Anyway... 👍👍"
Suspenseful and poetic
"I enjoyed the protagonist, her way of thinking and how she goes with the flow. A really interesting read! "
Beautiful and Poetic, with a hint of sorrow and hurt.
"Truly such a wildly interesting read. The format was unique and refreshing and just like I mentioned in the comments within, the author has such a beautiful mastery over prose. It took a little while to get used to the formatting but once I did it was truly amazing. I had left a comment inside that captures it perfectly I think. It is truly amazing how you can balance such contrasting ideas as feeling anonymous and yet deeply personal. For that I congratulate you author! Well done truly! -- Shiori"
Falling Like Seasons
"I think this is a great book. It has a nice flow and it's easy to read through. I'm glad the chapters show poetry elements such as repetition. Things like that enhance the story and make it easier to read. There weren't any punctuation or grammar errors that I noticed. Some sentences were confusing such as the one in the first chapter that said "They claim I come alive but once a year when bees harvest nectar from the petals." It seems to stop suddenly and can get very confusing. Can't wait for an update, happy writing!"
Review
"I am absolutely amazed. You have done an amazing job. I love the details and the surprises of course ❤️😂. You have nailed it. Keep it up🔥"
A Poetic Love Story: Falling Like Seasons
"The writing style of "Falling Like Seasons" is nothing short of beautiful and poetic. The short chapters and the suspense woven throughout the narrative make it incredibly engaging, urging readers to keep turning the pages. Despite its poetic nature, the story maintains a clear plot, although some of the locations can be a bit confusing at times. Lav's heart is shattered, and she feels like the walls of life are closing in on her. She poignantly states, "Trying too hard makes you look lonely," capturing her deep sense of despair. At that moment, she meets a guy who tries to lift her spirits. After his third attempt, she finally agrees to go with him, leading to an unexpected kiss that changes everything. Lav often feels insecure because Michael (I'm not entirely sure if I got the name right) is quite popular, while she is the opposite. Michael is an artist, and Lav is a poet, making for a beautifully complementary relationship. Lav shows remarkable strength when she stands up for herself against a ridiculing lady in the band, and Michael stands by her side, supporting her. His songs for her fill her mind with poems every time she lays eyes on him. Their love grows with the changing seasons, blossoming like trees in spring. I particularly appreciated how the writer includes a quote at the beginning of each chapter, which adds an enticing element to the story. These quotes set the tone and deepen the reader's connection to the unfolding events. Despite the occasional confusion with the locations, the plot is straightforward and compelling. The poetic style enriches the narrative, making the characters' emotions and experiences feel incredibly vivid and real. Lav and Michael's journey is a testament to the healing power of love and the beauty of finding a kindred spirit. "Falling Like Seasons" is a captivating read, and I look forward to seeing how Lav and Michael's love story continues to unfold. Kudos to the author for crafting such an enchanting and poetic tale. This book is a gem that deserves to be savored by readers who appreciate the delicate interplay of love, art, and poetry. Good job, author. Your work is truly a delight."
Looking forward to the rest
"Very poetic, a lovely flow to the words that feels similar to a song. Striking imagery with vivid descriptions. Very moving."
A Poetic Romance!
"This story is so poetic! Filled with the beautiful inner monologue of the MC, lavender. And beautiful descriptions of scenery as well. It was so unexpected to see the entire story in prose. I love that! It is very unique while offering a pov that feels much like a dream. My note to the author would be to deepen the connection between the reader and this world by adding more about everyday life. Most of all the scenes are about Lav and Gabriel, sweet moments, or her thoughts of him. But what does she do or think about as herself? And how does Gabriel add to or intervene into her world? I think adding scenes that are void of romantic moments will help the reader to connect to the characters deeper which will make bigger moments feel earned. I was really curious about Gabriel himself but, not many moments were shown of himself. What is he like? What are his beliefs? What are his flaws? Most importantly how does he add to (or take away from ) lav’s life? I wasn’t sure if the the rose tinted perspective was intentional for any type of reveal so, I wanted to wait till the end to mention that. Your writing really reminds me of Laura Dave during the dialogue between the two of them! Really cool and unique!🤗 I hope the author continues to share her writing and beautiful poetic style and that she continues to develop the world of lavender and Gabriel’s love.❤️ "
