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Appreciation and Commission Request

"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "

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The Moon's Chosen

"Good story so far. Thank you for giving intro/back story. "

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Interesting

"The plot is really interesting. It's a little bit of a slow burn but the author keeps things moving along in each chapter. I expected it to time hop directly to Elana's eighteenth birthday and I was really surprised it didn't. I thought that's when the plot would get really interesting. "

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