Inkitt
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Not confusing it’s twisting

"Great storyline, compelling written, characteristics, everything is moving gorward the story like twisted"

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Confusing

"The story is all over the place. People change and location changes. The story repeats itself in the first chapters. If the author created a smooth story than I truly believe this could be a great novel."

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Confused

"This story kept changing. Every part of the story was repeated in a different context. Very hard to read."

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