What is your opinion?
Shocking!
" I really loved how you changed the original story and made it your own. Although I am not a fan of short stories, I admit it has its charm. Not having grammatical errors made it acceptable. The end was a bit shady, I wanted to know how she explained her absence for ten years or how was her family's reaction, if she has any. All in all, I liked your short story 😊."
FIn-tresting
"Even with the title Fin Fatale, I still expected something along the lines of The Little Mermaid. A sort of fairy-tale. I was surprised! When he swam up to her the entire world changed. The story was too short for me, but it still sets a great precedent about a whole new underwater world that is filled with women and men that possess enough human emotion to pass as one of us but none of the guilt that could weigh down the consciousness. MAKE IT LONGER! i want to read about her home!"
