A serious read

" I just read a few chapters of this story, and I have to say, the author's world-building and character development are impressive! I was thinking that adding a touch of humor might make the intense scenes even more engaging. For example, a bit of witty dialogue or funny moments, like in Percy Jackson, could really bring out the characters' personalities and keep the readers hooked. And the concept is exquisite. If the author could make this story a bit humorous, I bet readers will be hooked to it. It is easy to add humor in first person point of view. The author's writing style is wonderful. Keep my advice in mind. Harry Potter is widely famous because of the situation based humor and funny side characters, the author had used and be sure to read Percy Jackson for more suggestions of situation based humor. It is super funny and won the Red house. This story is wonderful and be sure to check it out. With a bit of humor, it can one day win awards too!"