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Interesting book

"This book is really interesting and I’m really enjoying it "

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The Billionaire’s Surprise Baby

"I love this story, the plot, the author’s writing style and the characters. It is an amazing, exciting and wonderful love story. I hate the way we are left hanging not knowing what is going to happen between them. "

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😍😍😍

"This story is so good I can’t wait for the updates!!!! "

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Great story, please update

"It's a captivating story, well done 👍, just some spelling errors you need to correct"

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LOVE LOVE LOVE

"Love everything about this story so far. Look forward to finding updates daily!!!!"

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Really good

"Can’t wait to read the entire book Hoping that you release the book soon "

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Billionaire pregnancy

"It's a good book"

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Billionaire surprise baby 👶

"I like the plot, I would recommend to my junior sister,I don't like erotic books but I am looking forward to seeing what will happen "

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Billionaires suprise baby

"Interesting start to the story. Looking forward to seeing how the two main characters will interact for the remainder of the months until the baby is born."

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Billionaire's surprise baby

"It a very interesting story please update"

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Good story so far but the grammar is horrible

"I am currently on chapter 29. The plot is not bad but the writing is horrible. I'm sorry but I have to read every other second 2-3 times and put a puzzle together to understand the meaning. It's pretty bad and it has not been checked or edited for sure. English is not my first language but even I get frustrated with the lack of effort in terms of correcting the text. Better use Google translate when uncertain, the outcome would be more readable. "

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Invested so I have to continue

"The author needs help with grammar and proofreading reading. "

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Billionaires surprise baby

"I like the book cause it's straight to the point and would recommend to my friends "

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Grammar People!

"So frustrating! A lot of grammatical errors, incorrect sentence structure and incorrect word use. All the way through the incorrect character name was used in the incorrect scene. Sometimes, even the name of Brynn was used when there wasn’t even a character of that name and it was referring to a main character. Towards the end of the book it seemed as though someone else was writing. The way they initially get together is a bit messed up. I apologise if this comes across as harsh as I’m a bit of a grammar natzi, there was a lot of misuse or at times would have benefited from punctuation. But a bit of editing and you would be good to go."

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