Oda Al Sistema Solar [El Universo Que Somos] ✔ by Mel Velásquez at Inkitt
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Oda al Sistema Solar [El Universo que Somos] ✔

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Summary

El universo vibra en nosotros, se filtra en nuestras venas y se experimenta a si mismo en nuestras vidas. Este es un compilatorio de ODAS a los cuerpos celestes de nuestro sistema solar y personificaciones de los planetas compiladas en microficciones.

Status
Complete
Chapters
22
Rating
4.5 2 reviews
Age Rating
13+

Oda al SOL

Bajo su corona radiante,

fina y pura,

suspendido en la infinidad oscura,

lejos de impíos y sin premura,

reina el Astro rey cuan salvaje criatura.


Sus rayos de energía vibrante,

tan constantes y atemorizantes,

azotan todo lo que tocan,

sin mediar lo que provocan.


Se transforman en vida,

tras la caricia concedida,

sin ningún remordimiento,

quitando así el aliento.


Pero algún día,

sin importar quién al final ría,

explotará en mil fragmentos,

sin dar paso a ningún lamento.


La oscuridad será su nueva cara,

tan incorpórea y llana,

Y arrastrará hacia sus fauces,

sin ningún cauce,

Y cuando todo ello pase

Al fin habrá muerto,

el cuerpo de cien lamentos

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Poema muy profundo que toca muy bien el tema del principio y el fin , la luz y la oscuridad además de la paciencia del tiempo al dejarnos claros que la muerte es innegable ❤️

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Nunca he sido de poemas, pero esto me ha cautivado ✨🤍 es precioso 🥰

2 years

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