Create New List
Share with your friends
Customize readability

Oda al Sistema Solar [El Universo que Somos] ✔

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

El universo vibra en nosotros, se filtra en nuestras venas y se experimenta a si mismo en nuestras vidas. Este es un compilatorio de ODAS a los cuerpos celestes de nuestro sistema solar y personificaciones de los planetas compiladas en microficciones.

Status
Complete
Chapters
22
Rating
4.5 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

Oda al SOL

Bajo su corona radiante,

fina y pura,

suspendido en la infinidad oscura,

lejos de impíos y sin premura,

reina el Astro rey cuan salvaje criatura.


Sus rayos de energía vibrante,

tan constantes y atemorizantes,

azotan todo lo que tocan,

sin mediar lo que provocan.


Se transforman en vida,

tras la caricia concedida,

sin ningún remordimiento,

quitando así el aliento.


Pero algún día,

sin importar quién al final ría,

explotará en mil fragmentos,

sin dar paso a ningún lamento.


La oscuridad será su nueva cara,

tan incorpórea y llana,

Y arrastrará hacia sus fauces,

sin ningún cauce,

Y cuando todo ello pase

Al fin habrá muerto,

el cuerpo de cien lamentos

Let Mel Velásquez know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

1

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

1

Profound

Heartwarming

1

Heartwarming

Shocking

1

Shocking

Good Writing

1

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

1

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

author

Poema muy profundo que toca muy bien el tema del principio y el fin , la luz y la oscuridad además de la paciencia del tiempo al dejarnos claros que la muerte es innegable ❤️

2 years
author

Nunca he sido de poemas, pero esto me ha cautivado ✨🤍 es precioso 🥰

2 years

Further Recommendations

The Relentless Arrow of Time

markfrominkitt: Very creative. I would like to feature your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at exzordsdevs AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks. Only 50 spots are left..Mark

Read Now
Letters to Dear E

JeordieDravenX80: Absolutely love the flow ❤️ ⭐✨

Read Now
Fate of Moon

Ding___dong: The moment i saw the story and read it i was so emotional at first...🤧❤️‍🩹 the amount of pain and importance of true love this story holds is insane author😭🤍...i am so impressed how beautifully you are explaining the religion in this story and after readinf this story till now i also got the fee...

Read Now
Life Of A Blackman: Within Me There Is Strength: Giving Our Hearts To God🗣️

Olivia: Your story has awesome comic potential! I can draw one discounted test page so you can get a feel for my visual approach.Instagram: @oliviaharper_71Twitter: @HarperOliv56351

Read Now
Rooftop promise

Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...

Read Now
TIARA : A Search for Princess

Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...

Read Now
The new girl.

Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...

Read Now
Desire's Dilemma - Elizabeth's Story

Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...

Read Now
Negeri Hari Esok (COMPLETED)

Sarah: Your story has become one of my favorites. I love how you developed the characters over time. Are you already working on another story, or do you have any ideas for future projects?

Read Now