What is your opinion?
Lovely Story
"Hello there, if you are looking for an ingaging fantasy story, Liam will take you with him in a brilliant Fantasy story so good and so intruiging to the point at which i was seriously doubting if the story was stolen from somewhere else. (Its not, i asked). So if you are a fan of Fantasy Magic and a little bit of drama and heartfelt. Enjoy ! Having said this im now going to dig a little deeper into the story and what not. Here goes nothing. Liam the Book of Lexis has quite a fast pace, there aren*t many sidequest or plots that do not intervene into the main story. This has the added bonus that the story feels very, very ingaging. Making it hard to stop reading it. (Thanks to you i had 4 hours of sleep instead of 8 last night). Jumping from one adventure to the next one i found myself having to concentrate more than usually. Trying to understand and puzzle together al the people and the world Liam just crashed into. Making me feel just like Liam, learning, adapting. A lot of fun. But i feel like that readers which just started might be repelled by the fast pace. I personally would not mind there beeing more to the story than "just" the main plot there is right now. Adding in time for the story to slow down in between. To give the reader time to adjust. Might it only be a day of shopping with a friend. Going to a cafe. Or a little sidequest story to defend someone in need that he so happens to meet. To seconding that i felt like the character development was a little rushed at times. Not just for liam. But for everyone involved. Not to spoil to much but i really liked how u used liams ability to accelerate the evolution of the others. At the same time i saw a missed oportunity for a little side story. Making it once again feel rushed. Catapulting the characters further than neeeded to have them ready for the "end" . The last 5 to 10 chapters kept me especially on edge. Making me forget the time while reading. The end tho again felt quite jumpy and abrupt, if not a bit desperate to connect everything to the start of the story. While still remaining at a fast pace. And last but not least, for my own personal sake i would really have liked there beeing a little more Epiloque with the other characters involved maybe taking the opportunity to hint to the next story waiting to be released. Having said all that, i really dearly want to thank you for writing this story. Its is not just good, its quite brilliant actually. And i firmly believe that this is going to hit a lot of people up sonner rather than later. Keep at it! Yours sincerly Malte :) Ps- thanks for updating the story to link to your other socials. Missed that when writing to you the first time around :D And note to anyone, english is not my first language theres probably a thousand mistakes in this. Im not a writer, im a reader :P"
Surprising twists
"In this chapter the speed in which the plot. Was developing slowed down considerably, the detail of the home was a little to much almost as if the author was preparing a new onslaught of action and new twists, the writing is compelling and makes the reader feel the emotions that Liam is feeling so your moving along with him as the story moves along"
