What is your opinion?
The silence it carries
"I loved this story! After they found him in Russia, I was thinking “ he's going to find a way to get away.” After the judge read the sentence, and the bailiffs took him away, I thought “ It ain’t over ‘ till it’s over. “ Then you delivered that suspenseful ending… “Robin, are you going to get away, after all? “"
Amazing ✍️
"To be honest, I was cheering for Robin. It's weird that I wanted him to get away. What happened with Sara and his dad was an isolated incident that he didn't even repeated. My intrusive thoughts are..."
Fast paced thriller
"Loved the ending! I also liked how the main character was portrayed like a 'Brightburn' kind of character with a very healthy (or unhealthy) dose of psychopathy. The backstory about his sister seemed to hint that he had been broken by his sister's death, but I can see that Robin is just a very clever and cunning psychopath through and through. It is also interesting how Robin turned out almost exactly like the murderer who killed his sister, escaped and never to be found again. The only difference is that we never found out the identity of that murderer, unlike Robin who became an international criminal. The only gripe I had with the story was that Robin wins way too often, which lowers the tension in any scene since he comes out on top all the time. His journey evading the authorities is a little too easy, which may seem unrealistic at times. Or maybe it's just a testament to how little the authorities can do. All in all, this story is a very fast paced thriller with a satisfying ending. The story is told in a short and succinct manner, suitable for those who are looking to binge read it."
A lot of content
"Congratulations on all the hard work it took to write that story. I think you should combine the Chips character and the detective whose daughter was killed into one character. Thank you."
Unreal
"Smulling to Russia not believe "
