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"Very nice to read all rhyming lines and words like it."

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Her Life

"Goo should be good. It'll be much better if you actually finish your words. Goo reminds me of stuff that can be absolutely disgusting. I don't think that is what you mean here. If you mean goo to be something that is not disgusting, then you really need to see facial expressions. Those are not here. So finish the word."

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