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Say it's over

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Summary

What happens when the one person you should've gotten love from abandons you and your brother at such a young age? Can you learn to love anyone else? Kade draws up a plan for Ailah to teach him how to love. What happens when that backfires and real feelings get involved? Kade struggles to love the only women who've been there to clean up his messes. Ailah struggles to stay with Kade because of how he treats her. Will Kade realize what he's giving up In time or will Ailah decide he isn't worth the heartbreak?

Status
1yr ago
Chapters
12
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Disclaimer

COPYRIGHT

This book is my work!! It is made up of my own thoughts a feelings. I do not consent to anyone taking parts from my book and claiming it as their own.

AUTHORS NOTE

This book is 100% made up with a few real events that happened in my life and my past relationships with an ex and my father. Ailah is pronounced Ay-La and she is mixed with black and white. Meanwhile, everyone else is white with Latin or Italian backgrounds they just don’t speak the language you’ll find out why later. Just thought you guys should know since some things are not said in the story.

This is my first completed book even if it’s not completed at the time you are reading this. I would love constructive criticism and POSITIVE feedback on how the story is doing so far, if you feel it’s moving too fast, and what I can improve on. I want this story to be a hit even if it’s just a few hundred people who read it. This book means a lot to me as well as the characters. I spent hours creating their portfolios and how I wanted them to be represented as well as their backgrounds and history, so I hope you like them.

NOVELS PLAYLIST!!

(Each song has its own chapter I recommend you play it on. You will receive a note that says play now. If you can’t it’s fine but it will make the chapters come to life as if it was a movie)

Little victories- Malia civets

Best day of my life- American Authors

We are broken- This, the silent war

Hurts so good- Astrid s

Say it- Maggie rogers

Spin you around- Morgan Wallen

Let it go- Birdy & Rhodes

Long time coming- Tomi

Proud- Rita ora

I want you- Tayla Parx

Family tree- Mathew west

Sinatra- Forrest Nolan

Before it breaks- Brandi Carlile

LAST NOTE

This book is influenced by the song “Before it breaks” By Brandi Carlile. That is why the book’s name is “Say it’s over” and any spin-off I make will have the title being other lyrics from the song. Some of you will hate me for the outcome of this book. Whether I decide to make a second part or not this book for the most part can be looked at and read as a stand-alone novel. It may piss some of you off but it is what it is. I am making a ‘Say’ series so this wouldn’t be the last of this family.

Happy reading!

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