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Appereciation And Commission Request.!

"Just finished your story and I have to say it was truly compelling. Your characters felt alive and well-developed. I’m a comic/manga/Webtoon artist currently taking commissions (covers, pages, scenes). If you ever want to turn any part into visuals, I’d love to collaborate. Let's connect: flemingmichelle28"

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Just wow!

"Great story I laughed and cried was excited and sad! You had me wanting more! I hope to see more stories like this one!"

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Love

"I’m immensely, enjoying this book as other reviews say quite a few misspellings or and some grammatical mistakes. But it once wouldn’t stop me from reading it. It’s very good."

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Beautiful story with (unfortunately) numerous grammar mistakes

"I thoroughly enjoyed this story. However, the only thing that threw me off was that the writer had trouble differentiating 'your' and 'you're' and that there were spelling errors in the later 95% of the chapters (the ones that we had to pay for). To me, if I paid for something, I would have appreciated some vetting through to make my reading seamless and enjoyable. Nonetheless, a truly fun and enjoyable read, I'll miss Zaliver and Vivian. "

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Fated to the dangerous alpha

"Lots of incorrect words used"

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Needs english editing

"The quotations are so messed up you can’t tell when outward speech and self reflection start at end. Literally quotes mid sentence mid quote. Had to stop reading solely because of this. "

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