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Such hard work

"To be honest, can't say much about the plot, character growth, sub plots because I couldn't even finish the introduction, this translation is one of the worst I've read. Most sentences are complete gibberish, you have to re read them four or five times to make them make sense. You never know who's talking is it in first or third person. Even the characters genders chop and change. Spellings are so bad you can't even guess at what the word suppose to be. But I will say if all this was fixed think this could be a good read, "

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