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AHHH! The SKY is FALLLING!

"Reality is caving in! If this happened in real life it would be really scary!! The author does a GREAT job of bringing the reader along for the journey. Even though the ideas were complex, it was very understandable leaving the audience with the intended sense of urgency and doom. Imagery was very well done! I pictured the scenes very well in my head. I'm not sure how this story will end....How can you fight against powers stronger than our own concept of reality?! Even so, the story has given the characters a set up for one heck of a ride. It is truly a great feeling to review a well written work that is captivating, has good imagery, and is complex. Good work! "

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