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Loooved

"I bought a subscription just to read this book and it was well worth it. I read it the whole way through without stopping and would do it again and again. My only disappointment is that it’s over. Great writing author 🩶"

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Trilled

"Omggg!!!! Dammit so a good book full of love and action! Every capture i was trilled to read! Exciting! Thank u!!!"

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Wow

"This is a great story ❤️ I hope there will be a second book finding the brothers mate❤️ The world building is fantastic!"

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Well, when's the next book?

"I loved this story. There needs to be more books to this series."

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Wattpad reader

"I first read this novel on Wattpad when the whole story was posted on there and I was in love with it. I wanted to read it again but couldn’t find it and when I did I see that the author couldn’t post the full story on Wattpad anymore so I came here to read it again and it’s just as good as reading it for the first time. "

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The breeder experiment

"I love the book wish it was a little longer, but it was perfect! Love the storyline love the characters. Love everything about it thank you author for a wonderful book.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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The Breeder Experiment

"The plot was interesting and engaging. The writing could use some polishing and possibly editing - there were some spelling and grammatical errors. The ending was too abrupt, there is more to this story; I feel like it was only half told. The story structure was excellent, the character development of Elina was very good; Lazarus, not so much - I have so many unanswered questions. I want to know what happens next: how do the humans integrate into Galdrian society, does the experiment provide the solution to the problem, how do the humans respond to the invitation (15 women getting trafficked does not make national news, happens EVERY SINGLE DAY in our current global society. 5,000 women - maybe makes the news, but only if it happens in a single country in a short time frame of 1-2 days. 15,000,000 women in a short time frame - definitely, but what entity would be monitoring globally?) I was disappointed that Elina's friend Andrea/Amber? was not selected as a mate. This story is so unfinished! You have talent, but you need to grow it. I liked the story and I wanted more at the end. I would have been satisfies with at LEAST 400 chapters. I am eager to read your other stories."

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