What is your opinion?
🎶 She has the Midas touch …🎶
"Dr. Sarah Rose has always been known for her fearless countenance and skills as a Pediatric Doctor. When Neil Rein, the four-year-old son of the fabulously wealthy Zarek Rein, comes to the hospital with a high fever, Dr. Rose doesn’t hesitate for one moment. “Who do you think you are?” Rein’s servants shout at her. “Master Rein is not to be touched by anyone except his father and assigned doctor.” But Dr. Rose understands that protocol doesn’t matter when a child’s life is on the line. Within a few moments Dr. Rose gives the young child an injection that wakens him from his coma. “Are you my mommy?” he asks Dr. Rose, as Neil takes in her attractive appearance. “She certainly is not!” replies the gorgeous, but cold-hearted Zarek Rein who has just arrived at the hospital. Dr. Rose feels honored but a little intimidated to be in his presence. She wonders what Mr. Zarek Rein is feeling as his eyes slide with interest over her face and body. An interesting start. My favorite character is Zarek Rein, who reminds me a little bit of the dark and mysterious Black Butler from the anime of the same name. Does anyone still watch that show? (I admit I had a crush on the butler even though he was a cartoon figure. Now I’m embarrassed. 🤣) Anyway, I can’t wait to see where this story goes."
READ AND REVIEW
"Guys this is SAM here! Do read my story and let me know how you find it to be in the comments and the review section. HAVE A GOOD DAY READING!"
AMAZING BOOK
"I loved this ongoing story because it has so much detail and it really has me hooked! I would definitely recommend to other readers! 5 Stars!!! Nice job!!! :D ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐"
Hooked
"I was hooked from the start and can't wait for more chapters! But I gotta say, the story feels like it's missing some depth in the plot. I'd love to see more development and layers added to keep things interesting!"
Innovative
"It is a great original story. I do love how her parents are involved and how the closeness of their family is shown. I think that is something a lot of books miss so I am glad that it was incorporated. I love how it is shown that she loves her job so much, that she was panicking she was late. Overall good job."
Good Plot
"The plot is interesting. I'm guessing this is an English as a second language novel. There are some grammar and punctuation problems. Some phrases and words are used in odd ways for an English speaker. The good plot shines through. Don't give up! I don't give 5/5 easily. Keep writing. "
Has potential
"I prefer not to leave bad reviews but this one comes at the insistence of the author. The biggest issue is all the plotholes and missing information. I was asking a lot of questions as I went along and making some corrections. The book has potential, but it could use a serious rewrite. Saying something is a short story is a bad excuse for skipping out on necessary details. There's a good story in the somewhere, but details please. And if you don't know something, do some research. All the best with your writing in future"
