What is your opinion?
Good story
"The characters are well developed and so is the plot. The only thing missing is punctuation. There needs to be either a period, exclamation point, or question mark at the end of a sentence. Other than that, awesome story! "
can wait for more
"i absolutely love this story so far cant wait to see where' it goes from here! hope the accept each other "
Mira, Mira on the wall …
"Mira is tired of playing the role of the ‘good little girl’. At night she is the leader of the most notorious motorcycle gang in the city and is proud as hell of it. She robs and steals and is every man’s secret fantasy with her tight leather boots and jacket, her long, cascading hair and haughty, malicious eyes. But at school she is forced back into the image of straight ‘A’s Mira. Harmless and cute and too innocent to be sexually desirable. The only thing about her image is that it might attract the attention of Jake, who is also nerdy and bookish and yet is somehow …so hot! Jake is well aware of his nerdy reputation at school. So he would never dream of talking to Mira the cute little brunette in her classroom, let alone ask her out on a date. Besides he has bigger fish to fry, like the bad ass female leader of the night motorcycle gang. Sure, she’s hot, but that won’t be enough to protect her from his own bad ass bike riders and perhaps his kisses and embrace deep in the night. This is a good start for a book. It’s a shame the novel ends after four chapters, though the author Carrie promises to continue if she gets enough followers. Well, I’ll add my name to her Follower List. Here’s hoping Carrie will update soon."
Edit & Polish
"I think you have a good story here, and I'd love to see more, but you really need to edit the misspelling, punctuation, and technical writing skills, such as to, too & two. Please see this as constructive and not negative to help you perfect your craft. I'm looking forward to more chapters."
Hmmm interesting
"Intriguing I can't wait for updates"
