Inkitt
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Excellent

"Very interesting book. Like character of Dabby as she is so calm even though she's mistreated by Damien"

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The stepbrother

"Interesting so far. Not sure what the plot so waiting to see where this goes "

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U stepbrother too hot to handle

"Im looking foreward to see the plot unfold as the character Dabby starts to develop into a stronger person. "

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My step brother too hot to handle

"Is a very nice story line and it’s quite interesting to read"

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My Steph brother too Hot to handle

"I hope many more people will read this bcs im one of the first and i think i many people will love it. I love the story but it is a little bit original but i still love it🥰"

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The hateful stepbrother.

"Disliked the phrasing "

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My stepbrother too hot to handle

"The story is a little slow at times times. The characters seem to also be boring that makes it seem that the writer is not really into the story."

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