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What is your opinion?

My Thoughts

"I loved this story and reading it became so involved with the characters. So well written and described so well too. Cannot wait to see the next part of Lucy’s and the rest of the crew’s life. Excellent."

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Very good readdl

"Different entertainment evoking very good"

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A slaves story

"I love how this story envelops the reader in a slaves journey to understand herself. She discovers emotions and navigates her way to understand how to live and love herself and other around her. After years of living in slave trauma she learns to navigate a new life with people who care about her. With a new owner who deals with his own trauma and anger they play off each other to grow and understand themselves. An excellently written story that makes me empathize with the characters and makes me want to give them all a hug!"

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Can I get an opportunity?

"I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Fighting for hope; Breaking her" and was truly captivated by your compelling narrative and unique vision. The depth of your story, combined with its striking potential, sparked my imagination, and I believe it would translate beautifully into a comic format. As a professional commission artist with a passion for storytelling through visual art, I am currently open for new projects. I would love the opportunity to collaborate with you in adapting your story into a comic, where I can bring your characters and world to life with meticulous care and creativity. My goal would be to stay true to the essence of your work while enhancing the emotional impact and immersive experience for readers. If this is something that piques your interest, I would be thrilled to discuss potential collaboration details, including artistic style, project scope, and pricing, to ensure we can create something truly special together. It would be great if we could discuss this further on Discord my username is [graphic_gold] or X : VKox139175 to exchange ideas more seamlessly. Thank you for your time, and I look forward to the possibility of working together on this exciting project. "

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Intense

"It’s sad and so intense. I love it"

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Not sure where this is going

"I know a lot of this is the psychological voyage of somebody who’s been a slave, but we have this caravan or train and it’s supposed to be going somewhere for a purpose, but I’m not quite sure what that purpose is. I think the story would be even better if there was more of that kind of plot woven into the everyday story"

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