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Amazing!

"This story is very different from rest. Its soul's adventure on both physical and metaphysical plane. It's thrilling, profound, has element of supernatural and shows a very different perceptive. The characters are well written and their relationship develops beautifully. I'm short of words but this is a beautiful story. A must read. "

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Left with few words

"The ache from lost love. It always leaves a mark, sometimes it is grand others it shatters. The past always leads to the present, we chose the path to our future. Well done "

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Beautiful Ancestor

"Your story has a really interesting premise and you develop your initial idea well. You have a distinctive writing style and you do a good job at finding a balance between humour and fantasy. You handle the dialogue particularly well and you clearly have a good ear for how people speak. This story deserves to be read!"

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