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Appereciation And Commission Request.!

"Just finished your story and I have to say it was truly compelling. Your characters felt alive and well-developed. I’m a comic/manga/Webtoon artist currently taking commissions (covers, pages, scenes). If you ever want to turn any part into visuals, I’d love to collaborate. Let's connect: flemingmichelle28"

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"The book was really good! The plot was interesting and (I think) original. I wished there would be a fight scene where Percy, Jason, Piper, Annabeth etc. reveal their powers, but no biggie :) Please make a part 2! You left the book on a cliffhanger :( Thanks, and keep writing!"

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