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What is your opinion?

The ending!!!

"I really enjoyed this story, unrealistic however... It is a story not based on real life events which is the whole point of an erotica fantasy. I was not expecting the end which in my opinion was great and unexpected!! I am deffinetly looking forward to reading more from this author. "

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Interesting.....🤔

".....to read a story from the Stalker/Perpetrator POV. Very interesting....almost intriguing.... It's kinda written in a very raw.....rough....bluntly....inexorable way..... especially towards the end. Which really mirrors the Protagonist's emotions and state of mind. At some time I felt sympathy for him.....which also speaks for the Author....in my humble opinion that is of course. Besides the plausibility of all the encounters he has with women.....it's a very interesting read and well written including the ending. "

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Why? Why end this that way?

"I should have sensed that it would go this far. All along, it was getting more and more unrealistic. Improbable. I prefer to imagine an other ending (not so blue flower but more realistic). The pictures were not necessary. The guy never looks the same. I prefered the images my creativity was sending in my head. The end was a turn off for me. Sorry, it’s personal."

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