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"The chapters so far are great but a big tease. :) I'm anxious to read more! Is he really going to add more members to their play group? The more spice you add to the actual play time would be fantastic! "

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Under his control

"Unfinished. The story didn’t even start with any backstory. It was abrupt and then done. 3 chapters only shouldn’t be published. Disappointing. "

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