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Fooled by perfection

"Definitely kept me hooked! Your writing style required me to adjust a bit but I definitely enjoyed the urban flavor. Dezman and Ciana were a complete rollercoaster that I wasn't expecting! Excellent book author!"

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The Fabulous Ciana Star!

"All Arkina ever wanted out of life was perfection, but the start of her life was far from perfect. Born to a mother who didn’t have the ability to love her, she was passed around from aunt to aunt and was raised mostly by them. By the time Arkina became an adult, she had made up her mind who she wanted to be and what she wanted to accomplish in life. She would become a hair stylist and one day own her own beauty shop. And by the way, she was no longer Arkina from Armenis. Call her, Ciana Stars! There is only one problem in Ciana’s perfect new life. His name is Mikal. Drunk and abusive, Mikel always insists on breaking up with his women first. Girls do no not break up with Mikal. Those who try to end their relationships with Mikal before he is ready will earn his wrath. When Ciana moves to California in pursuit of her dreams, Mikal swears that this will not deter him from finding Ciana and making her sorry. There is much more, but I decided to temporarily stop at Chapter Three, just to get this review out. Author Xomonrose hints in her prologue that Ciana will discover a better man later. One that will treat Ciana with much more respect. I can’t wait to see that. Ciana deserves a good man in her life. Here’s a toast to Ciana’s future love, even if he does fall short of perfection. "

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