Vortaris
Hello, this is my first story. I’m writing my story in another language and translating it, so please don’t hesitate to let me know if I make any mistakes. Enjoy reading ♥
VORTARIS
There was a planet called Vortaris.
Vesteria: Where the nobles of the planet live, wars do not go beyond the land connecting the two countries. The nobles live in peace, calling themselves Vesterians, unlike the rest of the planet, and are away from the chaos of the rest of Vortaris. They reside in lands closest to A’k and N’ax, known as the holy lands.
Xolar: A piece of land surrounded by water, where the territory is vast. The waters on one side are ice, while the other side is devoid of life, and the part closer to Vesteria is stained with blood. Xolar males are known for their great stature, agility, and muscular bodies, to the point where the locals, as well as outsiders, refer to them as gigantic. Their eyes see and shine in the dark, tracking every movement of their prey.
Drakar: These lands are the color of blood, surrounded by a sea of obsidian, and enveloped by a cloud of red mist that poisons those who enter. Blood-spewing mountains and armies of terrifying red creatures inhabit the area. The giant mountains and caves host creatures with stone-like skin, misshapen bodies, and scarlet eyes. Because life is rare in these vast lands, they are constantly at war with other territories. Burnt corpses and skeletons of foolish armies, who sought to make a name for themselves and become the planet’s heroes, litter the landscape.
Holy Lands: A’k and N’ax
A’k: A peaceful land with dense forests, fertile soil, and abundant life. Artifacts in these lands contain the remains of the oldest known life in history. The people of the planet, believing in the magic these lands hold, do not disrespect them; even the most notorious race, the Dracs, do not set foot here.
N’ax: Lands covered with gold, believed to be the destination of those who have left this world.
Here my drawing how i imagine Vortaris
