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Little Red

"The story is interesting and thought provoking as to what trauma the character Jax has been through. As to Echo: he is sadistic. I would love to see this story unfolding . Ruby has a good fighting spirit that has not been tempered by the abuse at the hands of her grandmother or the bullies at school, what has me is the idea that Jaxon gets to judge the guilty and ends their life.... What monstrous things have been done to him that he feels he has the right to play judge and jury? Jax is a complex character.A lot of editing is needed but all in all a good suspenseful and intriguing read. Looking forward to the complete novel. "

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Plot twist

"I think there were some spelling mistakes while trying to write it. Other than that the story was good and I liked the plot twist. I hope echo warms up to red."

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