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Livre

"Belle histoire, j'adore "

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Great story

"Everything is perfect except for some grammatical and spelling errors. Absolutely love it! "

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The lost mafia princess

"Different story type"

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Rags to riches Cinderella type story

"Thank you for writing and sharing this creative story of unknown or hidden shifters and the mafia with us readers. Look forward to reading book 2."

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The lost mafia princess

"Loved the book would recommend to all my reader friends. Can't wait for book two! "

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The Lost Mafia Princess

"Great story. How one can survive physical and mental abuse. She had a family that she didn’t know about as she had been stolen as a baby. She found her family and mate. Looking forward to seeing more of her story"

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Really liked this.

"This was really good. I liked the strong family bonds and powers that have much more to tell. Good job for a first book! Looking forward to 2. Thanks author. "

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writting skills

"I truly enjoyed your story and found it very engaging. I'm eager to know when the next chapter will be available. What inspired you to create this story? Are you currently working on any other projects. Also do you have any story recommendations for me "

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The lost mafia princess

"It’s getting really interesting. Really want some updates"

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The lost Mafia princess

"The sneaky plot! Everyone I know! Because it's about the Mafia. I hope you add more soon I really like it so far! "

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The lost mafia princess

" The plot is great, and the story just polls me in I can't seem to stop. Would definitely. Recommend. "

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Awesome!!!!s Storyline keeps you interested ! Would love to read kore!

"Great storyline!"

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The lost mafia princess

"I dislike archer he just seems sneaky I think blade needs to keep a close eye on him "

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Great

"I love the book so far"

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Lost Mafia princess

"Lost Mafia princess the story is good so far hope to continue reading and see how much more the story offers . I really hope blaze and Ashlynn they together but so far i rate the story a 5 out 5"

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Love it so far

"Love it so far. Can't wait to read more."

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the lost mafia princess

"i like this kind of store it feels real when i read it but waiting for more chapters"

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Avid reade

"Really enjoying the story"

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The Lost Mafia Princess

"I love the character development and how we see more of the personality of each character come out. I also enjoy the plot with how she was kidnapped at a young age and found years later after the abuse she went through. The story follows the line in the right way aswell meaning by the end of every chapter I'm on edge waiting for the next chapter. I do think that a bit more detail could be used to describe the characters personalities a bit more, like Blaze and Archer. I mean we know a bit about them but personally I'd like more detail about their character."

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love it

"i absolutely love this story so far! the story line seems like its going to be really interesting."

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