Inkitt
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"I read all 4 chapters posted so far. The summary is excellent, as is the prologue. Chapter 1 introduces the FMC well. But Logan's chapter is a bit rushed for my taste but maintains the momentum of the story. The bond and mate lore is a bit confusing; it is still early in the story, so that's understandable. Flynn's chapter is when I wondered why he is important? It dragged a bit. The first few chapters show a lot of potential, but major events are yet to be revealed, such as the meeting Jax and the sowing of the conflict. "

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